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A cup of coffee, a faked smile,
Another sleepless night.
Forget the sorrow; pretend you're fine;
In the end you'll be alright.

And then the memories suddenly rise,
And then emotions are running high,
And all you want to do is –
Stop, you've got to fake a smile.

You walk along the roads alone.
The mask must never, ever, fall.
At times you wish to let it go,
But then you can't, and this is all

About to slip beyond control,
About to shatter you to pieces
You still don't let yourself to cry
Though tears are in your list of wishes

Facing the world a minute by minute,
Knowing your life is an act.
A cup of coffee, a faked smile,
Another sleepless night.
For the contest of :iconwriting-to-live:
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Edit: I won the second place, and am quite excited about it. :aww:
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is written beautifully. Very sad, but absolutely lovely. It flows very well. Congratulations on winning second in the contest!
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ninquetari Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
Thank you very much.
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure.
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aire73 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist
It's so beautifully true, you made me smile. :)
Congrats, too, auntie! <3
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ninquetari Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
I hope it was a real smile...
Thank you, dearie! <3
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aire73 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist
I realized how ironic my comment was once I'd posted it. XD You can be sure it was a perfectly real smile, auntie. :) You're welcome!
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ninquetari Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
I'm glad, then. :)
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I go through that... T_T
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ninquetari Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
:hug:
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthankyouplz:
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